How's my Driving?

Alright, I was recently informed that this would be a good idea to post. I don't mind crit as long as it is done... tastefully? Or.. like, nicely? I like nice people. God, I cannot word today. But, I am willing to accept crit or tips on how I can be a better Gil for you all. 
Again I am quite new to all of this but I am learning with every chance I can get. Thank you very much for reading!

And if you would like to contact me outside of LJ, my AIM is igotagearloose. 

Thank you~